“Like stones skipped across the surface of the water we are kept skimming along the peripheral, one-dimensional fringes of life. To sink is to vanish.” Merton’s Palace of Nowhere…James Finley
The fires of hell skip through my eyes,
my skimming defies repentant.
The Holy Ghost gallops beneath me,
waiting for me to dribble,
waiting for me to sink.
To vanish from the surface,
to land on the galloping horse
beneath me.
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Summer Rain
January 30, 2012 at 5:06 pm
dynamic imagery, love the word flow,
Happy Rally.
ZQ
January 30, 2012 at 6:31 pm
I always look forward to your comments (good, bad or indifferent
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dsnake1
January 31, 2012 at 2:57 pm
great imagery! it seems like the modern rat race to me.
ZQ
February 1, 2012 at 3:39 pm
You got it
dswan2
February 1, 2012 at 2:15 pm
Wow, you speak in rhyme! Thanks for making us think.
ZQ
February 1, 2012 at 3:38 pm
Thank you for your kind comment