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A Liar’s Sweet Surrender

02 Jun

Sweet sight,

an Aurora’s light, within my lover’s soul;

A spark so bright, budding roses burst unfold.

 

Men whisper of their meetings. Those without souls aflame,

leave  in jerking gesture; like lovers, teased in adolescent adventure.

(Admitting, not to be of such high-caliber, as to be in her presence, with hope or future).

 

Help me my friends, how do I describe her?

Pure, innocent, commissions’ love into presence!

Those who see our hearts embraced, will sigh.

Her smile will return a smile and softly render

the peace I feel she shares inside.

 

All are invited.

All who are willing to surrender.

 

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14 Comments

Posted by on June 2, 2013 in Erotica, Friendship, Outlaw, Philosophy, poems, Poetry, Zen

 

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14 responses to “A Liar’s Sweet Surrender

  1. brian miller

    June 2, 2013 at 3:47 pm

    oh for such a smile i would surely surrender…smiles…love how you approach this, at a distance at first…focusing on the men in their meetings….very cool write….and a nice read….

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 1:30 am

      Thank you Brian.

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  2. Mary

    June 2, 2013 at 5:25 pm

    This is really beautifully written, ZQ. She must be quite something.

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 1:31 am

      Thank you Mary 🙂

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  3. aregularcupofjo

    June 2, 2013 at 5:38 pm

    Such a great piece of writing. I loved all the raw emotions you poured into it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with everything 🙂

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 1:32 am

      Thank you Cup of Joe 🙂

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  4. J Cosmo Newbery

    June 2, 2013 at 8:52 pm

    Sounds risky!

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 1:33 am

      Hahaha 🙂 “Truth”

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  5. dsnake1

    June 3, 2013 at 1:15 am

    I surrender!

    cool poem. 🙂

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 1:34 am

      Me too 🙂

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  6. Sherry Marr

    June 3, 2013 at 2:55 am

    An intriguing poem….shall we stay tuned for updates? hee hee.

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 8:55 pm

      I’m keeping my eye you 🙂

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  7. Kelvin S.M.

    June 3, 2013 at 7:15 am

    …def quite an intriguing poem…

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    • ZQ

      June 3, 2013 at 8:54 pm

      Thank you.

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