A Liar’s Sweet Surrender

02 Jun

Sweet sight,

an Aurora’s light, within my lover’s soul;

A spark so bright, budding roses burst unfold.


Men whisper of their meetings. Those without souls aflame,

leave  in jerking gesture; like lovers, teased in adolescent adventure.

(Admitting, not to be of such high-caliber, as to be in her presence, with hope or future).


Help me my friends, how do I describe her?

Pure, innocent, commissions’ love into presence!

Those who see our hearts embraced, will sigh.

Her smile will return a smile and softly render

the peace I feel she shares inside.


All are invited.

All who are willing to surrender.



Posted by on June 2, 2013 in Erotica, Friendship, Outlaw, Philosophy, poems, Poetry, Zen



14 responses to “A Liar’s Sweet Surrender

  1. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 8:55 pm

    I’m keeping my eye you 🙂


  2. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 8:54 pm

    Thank you.


  3. Kelvin S.M.

    June 3, 2013 at 7:15 am

    …def quite an intriguing poem…


  4. Sherry Marr

    June 3, 2013 at 2:55 am

    An intriguing poem….shall we stay tuned for updates? hee hee.


  5. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 1:34 am

    Me too 🙂


  6. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 1:33 am

    Hahaha 🙂 “Truth”


  7. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 1:32 am

    Thank you Cup of Joe 🙂


  8. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 1:31 am

    Thank you Mary 🙂


  9. ZQ

    June 3, 2013 at 1:30 am

    Thank you Brian.


  10. dsnake1

    June 3, 2013 at 1:15 am

    I surrender!

    cool poem. 🙂


  11. J Cosmo Newbery

    June 2, 2013 at 8:52 pm

    Sounds risky!


  12. aregularcupofjo

    June 2, 2013 at 5:38 pm

    Such a great piece of writing. I loved all the raw emotions you poured into it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with everything 🙂


  13. Mary

    June 2, 2013 at 5:25 pm

    This is really beautifully written, ZQ. She must be quite something.


  14. brian miller

    June 2, 2013 at 3:47 pm

    oh for such a smile i would surely surrender…smiles…love how you approach this, at a distance at first…focusing on the men in their meetings….very cool write….and a nice read….



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