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16 Mar

The ring

The ring is off her finger

 The indentation         like the vows

 L   i   n  g   e r

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Posted by on March 16, 2014 in Beginnings, Children, Divorced, Hi-Koo, Mothers, religion

 

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  1. Brian Miller

    March 16, 2014 at 12:37 pm

    both only memories
    that wont leave

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  2. skipmars

    March 16, 2014 at 1:13 pm

    Ah, the concise end to a promising beginning. While the ring is a symbol of eternality, it can, alas, be melted down.

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 10:29 pm

      Geesh…I didn’t think of that, unless you mean all things can be melted down into another value…even that, I suppose, has no permanence 🙂
      Thanks for stopping by.

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      • skipmars

        March 16, 2014 at 10:44 pm

        Well . . .

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  3. Talon

    March 16, 2014 at 1:46 pm

    This made me smile, ZQ, as I recently had to have my wedding and engagement rings cut off to resize them. First time I’d had them off since they were placed there. eons ago. Felt strange without them…and the indents you mention were there. Like my finger had been a bit girdled. 🙂

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 10:30 pm

      Oh Boy! 🙂

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  4. claudia

    March 16, 2014 at 2:30 pm

    yes… i def. think they gonna linger for a while… it’s not something you can take off and then it’s gone..

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 10:37 pm

      Ya, I agree…

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  5. Sherry Blue Sky

    March 16, 2014 at 4:32 pm

    Perfection. I remember that indentation. I had a matching one in my soul back then…..good one, my friend!

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 10:40 pm

      Rumor has it you had rings on all your fingers…gold, silver, and precious stones 🙂
      Good morning Star Dreamer

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  6. Gabriella

    March 16, 2014 at 4:47 pm

    So much in these few words, ZQ! The indentation can evoke so many things.

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 10:42 pm

      Yes…sometimes I joke with others that my “shallowness has depth, you know!” 🙂

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  7. Rallentanda

    March 16, 2014 at 7:13 pm

    Clever concise and witty.

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 10:44 pm

      Thanks…I don’t know how those things hit paper and splat like that. 🙂

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  8. Sumana Roy

    March 16, 2014 at 11:09 pm

    life is full of such lingering moments…touched by the sadness of it….and thanks for the wonderful comment @ my blog.. 🙂

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    • ZQ

      March 16, 2014 at 11:14 pm

      The pleasure is all mine 🙂

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  9. dsnake1

    March 17, 2014 at 12:07 pm

    wow! you’re good with the shorter verses too. 🙂

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    • ZQ

      March 17, 2014 at 4:13 pm

      Haha …brevity was often a wish by some of my listeners 🙂 …oh ya, and some of my READERS!
      🙂
      Have a wonderful week.

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  10. Mama Zen

    March 17, 2014 at 3:11 pm

    Excellent.

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    • ZQ

      March 17, 2014 at 4:13 pm

      Thank you Mama 🙂

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