Posted by ZQ on May 4, 2014 in Beginnings, Children, Hi-Koo, Jails/Prison, Poetry, Spiritual, Zen
Tags: physi Abuse
May 4, 2014 at 8:35 am
one who cares enough
for all things & can see beyond their own tragedy.
May 4, 2014 at 8:49 am
There will be someone to take care of it……………
May 4, 2014 at 9:09 am
Beautiful. Kites all want to fly. And a tree is only a dangerous port in a storm.
Cressida de Nova
May 4, 2014 at 9:41 am
Someone who is caring. So it could be up there dangling in the branches for some time!
May 4, 2014 at 10:21 am
i love when someone cares enough to help untangle things and get them out in the sky again… no matter if it’s a kite or a person who needs help
Sherry Blue Sky
May 4, 2014 at 10:29 am
Beautiful, my friend.
May 4, 2014 at 11:33 am
Those things we played with and abandoned…whether by accident or by choice. I loved this, ZQ.
May 4, 2014 at 11:35 am
Delicate lines, like the subject itself. Need no untangling.
This would be nice for Susan’s Midweek Motif, ‘children’. I am still struggling with that.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
May 4, 2014 at 11:36 am
Who will? who ever helps someone else.. and yes the title helped me to an inner meaning.. compassion is what’s needed.
May 4, 2014 at 11:40 am
Lovely imagery, so tender.
May 4, 2014 at 1:00 pm
I second Brian and Björn …..this is a beautiful poem laden with sadness…..thank you for the lovely Hindi comment ZQ.. really enjoyed it and I’m still smiling… 🙂
May 4, 2014 at 5:12 pm
But that’s not for another week! relax
May 4, 2014 at 5:22 pm
Someone with a dream and will to make it come true ~ I love this post ~
May 4, 2014 at 5:25 pm
Now now my friends 🙂
May 4, 2014 at 5:35 pm
Thank you every one for all the gracious comments and welcomed visits.
May 4, 2014 at 8:49 pm
I like the fact that you mentioned ‘caring hands ‘
thanks for linking up at
Lunch Break Sunday meme
May 4, 2014 at 8:51 pm
I like the fact that you mentioned caring hands
Thanks for linking up at Lunch Break Sunday meme
May 4, 2014 at 10:09 pm
Aww love this–I once wrote a piece about a tree that ate a kite–this is much more tender–lovely!
May 5, 2014 at 9:06 am
and then i saw the title, and the poem takes on extra layers.
what a truly “show, don’t tell” poem is .
May 5, 2014 at 1:40 pm
It may just be my mood today, but this is so sad… Brilliantly written, love the concept, but so, so sad!
May 5, 2014 at 3:29 pm
Yes, but not the solution.
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