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Aceptance

13 Jul

 

Dark moss seeking sun

Birch bent with acknowledgement

Child runs to mother.

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Grass rising in dew

Casts crushed footsteps aside

Finds father in child.

 

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Posted by on July 13, 2014 in Father, Love, Mothers, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry

 

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42 responses to “Aceptance

  1. brian miller

    July 13, 2014 at 9:56 am

    ha. nice…the alliteration pulls this along smooth…the birch bent and the grass rising after the footsteps…cool imagery and symboilism

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  2. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 10:04 am

    Thank you…and good morning to you sir. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Nissa Annakindt

    July 13, 2014 at 10:35 am

    Acceptance. Nice imagery, simple, clean. Not sure how I feel about the word ‘acknowledgement’, I’m not sure how well it fits in with the rest being so long and abstract. But maybe the word grows on you? Anyway, thanks for sharing your work.

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  4. hedgewitch

    July 13, 2014 at 10:52 am

    A perfect circle.

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  5. Grace

    July 13, 2014 at 11:05 am

    A lovely haiku response ~ In the first, I like the symbolism of dark moss seeking the sun ~ The second I find intriguing as it is from another perspective specially with “Finds father in child” ~

    Thanks for linking up with Real Toads & wishing you happy weekend ~

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  6. Susan

    July 13, 2014 at 11:13 am

    Mother and Father are both there to be recognized–and what a reunion that is and will always be.

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  7. Gillena Cox

    July 13, 2014 at 11:23 am

    there is a wonderful response to the light, where finding happens , intriguing haiku duo. have a nice Sunday

    much love…

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  8. dsnake1

    July 13, 2014 at 11:51 am

    i like the image of “Dark moss seeking sun”, a great picture for perseverance. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Sherry Blue Sky

    July 13, 2014 at 12:00 pm

    Beautiful haiku with inscrutable Oriental message. Smiles…..hope you are having a nice Sunday, my friend.

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  10. Karen S.

    July 13, 2014 at 12:02 pm

    It’s like the circle of life! Lovely.

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  11. Sumana Roy

    July 13, 2014 at 12:51 pm

    nice set…love the first haiku seeking joy…

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  12. Kerry O'Connor

    July 13, 2014 at 1:43 pm

    You have captured the emotions so well in these brief lines.

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  13. Poet Laundry

    July 13, 2014 at 1:57 pm

    Very nice use of natural imagery to convey emotion ZQ.

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  14. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:10 pm

    Ya, I did look it up when I was researching… it seemed like an awkward word to me too. But, I settled with
    noun: acknowledgement…acceptance of the truth or existence of something.

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  15. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:10 pm

    Yes, Thank you for comment.

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  16. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:12 pm

    Thank you Grace and I do like going to “pond” on a hot summer day ๐Ÿ™‚

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  17. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:12 pm

    Amen!

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  18. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:13 pm

    Thank you see you at the World Cup ๐Ÿ™‚

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  19. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:14 pm

    Well there you are you ole snake in the grass…moss ๐Ÿ˜€

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  20. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:18 pm

    Missed last week… It was suggested not to blog until book is released. Thought about it… since when do I ever listen ๐Ÿ™‚
    Missed the gang there at PU; that are so gracious in accepting my/everyone’s work. Soooooo

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  21. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:19 pm

    Thank you Karen

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  22. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:19 pm

    ๐Ÿ™‚

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  23. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:22 pm

    Thank you Kerry and for the “Real Toads in an imaginary garden’s” opportunity to share.

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  24. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:24 pm

    Thank you Jennifer

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  25. Nataลกa Dolenc (@Natasek86)

    July 13, 2014 at 2:36 pm

    the second line is very clever. love the whole picture.

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  26. humbird

    July 13, 2014 at 2:37 pm

    I see the chain in this inter connection nature-human. Nice haiku.

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  27. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:46 pm

    Merci!

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  28. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 2:47 pm

    Thanks! …and may the links hold us strong

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  29. Mary

    July 13, 2014 at 4:28 pm

    Wow! Just wow!

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  30. G L Meisner

    July 13, 2014 at 4:44 pm

    Such a succinct poem. I enjoyed it.

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  31. Barry Dawson

    July 13, 2014 at 5:22 pm

    This feels very Zen-like. Or perhaps acceptance is a Zen of it’s own creation? Glad to catch this on a calm, relaxing Sunday. Enjoyable read.

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  32. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 9:36 pm

    Thank Mary. …and all the opportunities you give us to express ourselves.

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  33. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 9:37 pm

    Thank you for your visit.

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  34. ZQ

    July 13, 2014 at 9:38 pm

    Thanks Barry.

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  35. Helen

    July 14, 2014 at 12:35 pm

    Lovely haiku …

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  36. ZQ

    July 14, 2014 at 4:11 pm

    Thank You Helen

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  37. Gillena Cox

    July 15, 2014 at 10:08 am

    i have posted my response to ‘imaginary garden’ today

    http://myblog-lunchbreak.blogspot.com/2014/07/1471.html

    much love…

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  38. kaykuala h

    July 15, 2014 at 10:22 am

    A child is a smart chap these days. Like the second haiku! Wonderful write ZQ!

    Hank

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  39. Hannah Gosselin

    July 15, 2014 at 9:58 pm

    I so enjoy the personification of nature here…you bring all the characters here to life with your words. Beautiful opening, too.

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  40. Jim

    July 16, 2014 at 12:03 am

    ๐Ÿ™‚ He’s just like his dad, a chip off the old block. Nice logic here, R.K.
    Thank you for peeking in on my looonng poem.
    Sometimes it is hard to stop if a person doesn’t say all he feels needs to be said.
    ..

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  41. ZQ

    July 20, 2014 at 8:33 am

    Thank you Hank

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  42. ZQ

    July 20, 2014 at 8:34 am

    Thank you Ms. Gosselin ๐Ÿ™‚

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