Aceptance

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Aceptance

13 Jul

Dark moss seeking sun

Birch bent with acknowledgement

Child runs to mother.

Grass rising in dew

Casts crushed footsteps aside

Finds father in child.

42 Comments

Posted by ZQ on July 13, 2014 in Father, Love, Mothers, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry

Tags: Haiku, http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.se/, Imigration, spirituality

42 responses to “Aceptance”

ZQ

July 20, 2014 at 8:34 am

Thank you Ms. Gosselin 🙂

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ZQ

July 20, 2014 at 8:33 am

Thank you Hank

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Jim

July 16, 2014 at 12:03 am

🙂 He’s just like his dad, a chip off the old block. Nice logic here, R.K.
Thank you for peeking in on my looonng poem.
Sometimes it is hard to stop if a person doesn’t say all he feels needs to be said.
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Hannah Gosselin

July 15, 2014 at 9:58 pm

I so enjoy the personification of nature here…you bring all the characters here to life with your words. Beautiful opening, too.

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kaykuala h

July 15, 2014 at 10:22 am

A child is a smart chap these days. Like the second haiku! Wonderful write ZQ!

Hank

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Gillena Cox

July 15, 2014 at 10:08 am

i have posted my response to ‘imaginary garden’ today

http://myblog-lunchbreak.blogspot.com/2014/07/1471.html

much love…

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ZQ

July 14, 2014 at 4:11 pm

Thank You Helen

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Helen

July 14, 2014 at 12:35 pm

Lovely haiku …

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 9:38 pm

Thanks Barry.

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 9:37 pm

Thank you for your visit.

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 9:36 pm

Thank Mary. …and all the opportunities you give us to express ourselves.

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Barry Dawson

July 13, 2014 at 5:22 pm

This feels very Zen-like. Or perhaps acceptance is a Zen of it’s own creation? Glad to catch this on a calm, relaxing Sunday. Enjoyable read.

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G L Meisner

July 13, 2014 at 4:44 pm

Such a succinct poem. I enjoyed it.

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Mary

July 13, 2014 at 4:28 pm

Wow! Just wow!

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:47 pm

Thanks! …and may the links hold us strong

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:46 pm

Merci!

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humbird

July 13, 2014 at 2:37 pm

I see the chain in this inter connection nature-human. Nice haiku.

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Nataša Dolenc (@Natasek86)

July 13, 2014 at 2:36 pm

the second line is very clever. love the whole picture.

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:24 pm

Thank you Jennifer

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:22 pm

Thank you Kerry and for the “Real Toads in an imaginary garden’s” opportunity to share.

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:19 pm

🙂

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:19 pm

Thank you Karen

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:18 pm

Missed last week… It was suggested not to blog until book is released. Thought about it… since when do I ever listen 🙂
Missed the gang there at PU; that are so gracious in accepting my/everyone’s work. Soooooo

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:14 pm

Well there you are you ole snake in the grass…moss 😀

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:13 pm

Thank you see you at the World Cup 🙂

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:12 pm

Amen!

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:12 pm

Thank you Grace and I do like going to “pond” on a hot summer day 🙂

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:10 pm

Yes, Thank you for comment.

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 2:10 pm

Ya, I did look it up when I was researching… it seemed like an awkward word to me too. But, I settled with
noun: acknowledgement…acceptance of the truth or existence of something.

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Poet Laundry

July 13, 2014 at 1:57 pm

Very nice use of natural imagery to convey emotion ZQ.

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Kerry O'Connor

July 13, 2014 at 1:43 pm

You have captured the emotions so well in these brief lines.

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Sumana Roy

July 13, 2014 at 12:51 pm

nice set…love the first haiku seeking joy…

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Karen S.

July 13, 2014 at 12:02 pm

It’s like the circle of life! Lovely.

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Sherry Blue Sky

July 13, 2014 at 12:00 pm

Beautiful haiku with inscrutable Oriental message. Smiles…..hope you are having a nice Sunday, my friend.

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dsnake1

July 13, 2014 at 11:51 am

i like the image of “Dark moss seeking sun”, a great picture for perseverance. 🙂

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Gillena Cox

July 13, 2014 at 11:23 am

there is a wonderful response to the light, where finding happens , intriguing haiku duo. have a nice Sunday

much love…

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Susan

July 13, 2014 at 11:13 am

Mother and Father are both there to be recognized–and what a reunion that is and will always be.

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Grace

July 13, 2014 at 11:05 am

A lovely haiku response ~ In the first, I like the symbolism of dark moss seeking the sun ~ The second I find intriguing as it is from another perspective specially with “Finds father in child” ~

Thanks for linking up with Real Toads & wishing you happy weekend ~

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hedgewitch

July 13, 2014 at 10:52 am

A perfect circle.

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Nissa Annakindt

July 13, 2014 at 10:35 am

Acceptance. Nice imagery, simple, clean. Not sure how I feel about the word ‘acknowledgement’, I’m not sure how well it fits in with the rest being so long and abstract. But maybe the word grows on you? Anyway, thanks for sharing your work.

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ZQ

July 13, 2014 at 10:04 am

Thank you…and good morning to you sir. 🙂

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brian miller

July 13, 2014 at 9:56 am

ha. nice…the alliteration pulls this along smooth…the birch bent and the grass rising after the footsteps…cool imagery and symboilism

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