Summer’s Friendships
05
Oct
Posted by ZQ on October 5, 2014 in Beginnings, Haiku, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry
Tags: Haiku, http://omukuvah.org/, http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.se/, Relationship, Rose
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wolfsrosebud
October 11, 2014 at 9:41 am
beautiful pairing the wasp and rose… after last night’s frost… i’ll need to wait till spring for scent and buzz
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Sara v
October 7, 2014 at 7:59 pm
Thought the image,” torn from the center of the heart,” was perfect for the violent changes of seasons. Well penned 🙂
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G L Meisner
October 7, 2014 at 6:54 am
I think of bees getting ready for winter. A great poem.
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ManicDdaily
October 6, 2014 at 9:10 pm
A very distilled poem! Amazing how all is remade. k.
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Kim
October 6, 2014 at 3:10 pm
Kingdoms in autumn… this one gave me pause and then comfort. Powerful three liner!
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Abin Chakraborty
October 6, 2014 at 2:56 pm
ur lines glow like polished gems.the second stanza is especially beautiful.
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Hannah Gosselin
October 6, 2014 at 2:46 pm
Love the opening…the naming especially. Nice capture.
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Donna@Living From Happiness
October 6, 2014 at 1:07 pm
Seems we were thinking of the same thing as we wrote our poems for this week….awaiting spring as it all builds again…
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Myrna
October 6, 2014 at 11:32 am
Beautiful thoughts about the cycle of death and renewal. Lovely.
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1sojournal
October 6, 2014 at 11:02 am
There is a certain knowing sting to the passing of many seasons, yet winter’s hibernation allows us to contemplate that sting and hopefully accept it with grace.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
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moondustwriter
October 6, 2014 at 8:24 am
To summer we cling
blood hangs on rose thorn
the color of fall
many symbols to tie together and ponder…
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dsnake1
October 6, 2014 at 12:05 am
i am not too keen about the wasps returning. anyway, what goes round comes around later.
i am sensing some deeper meaning in those words, but the spade can’t go any deeper. 🙂
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claudia
October 5, 2014 at 11:24 pm
i’m looking forward to nature’s resurrection in spring already…
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Poet Stacy Lynn Mar
October 5, 2014 at 9:06 pm
what a magnificent comparison. lovely.
stacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/2014/10/saturday-prompt-2-starry-skies-and.html
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Loredana Donovan
October 5, 2014 at 8:31 pm
Both haiku are very nice ~ yes, everything is reborn in spring. There is a deeper meaning, too. Well done 🙂
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Rallentanda
October 5, 2014 at 5:39 pm
Spring is already here for us..Magical season. It never fails to give immense joy and optimism.
Lovely haiku. Enjoy your weekend !
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Gillena Cox
October 5, 2014 at 4:52 pm
aw yes i luv the renewal that is Spring
have a good week; thanks for linking to The Sunday Lime
much love…
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Talon
October 5, 2014 at 4:20 pm
The evolution of seasons so perfectly displayed.
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Gabriella
October 5, 2014 at 2:10 pm
I particularly like the second haiku, ZQ. I am sure we appreciate autumn more since we know spring will rebuild what we witness being destroyed.
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Sumana Roy
October 5, 2014 at 1:53 pm
love how spring mends the heart…
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Nataša Dolenc
October 5, 2014 at 1:26 pm
love that ending!
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Sherry Blue Sky
October 5, 2014 at 1:04 pm
WOW! Am struck by the kingdoms torn in autumn, rebuilt in spring. So true.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
October 5, 2014 at 12:47 pm
I think only the soldiers are lamenting the fall.
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drpkp
October 5, 2014 at 12:07 pm
This one begs for more careful reading – think there are greater depths here
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vandana
October 5, 2014 at 11:42 am
This has such a beautiful rhythm of autumn and spring:)
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Grace
October 5, 2014 at 10:22 am
Everything comes back anew in spring season ~
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Truedessa
October 5, 2014 at 10:16 am
Well, it is good to know things can be rebuilt in the spring and the rose will once again bloom.
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humbird
October 5, 2014 at 10:11 am
We really have to accept this change, the hibernation of beauty and return in spring…but it seems for heart to keep warmth we need to accumulate a new friendships…nice haiku x
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Mary
October 5, 2014 at 10:01 am
Thankfully we can always depend on spring to rebuild what goes dormant now. But I wish the wasps would NOT return…
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