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Dusk

02 Nov

She comes before dark

Trying to frighten the night

As the sunshine dims

 

Released fallen leaf

huddles below my window

Waiting to embrace the snow.

 

Dusk this winter’s eve

Refraining from a short day

Lights a bright candle.

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23 Comments

Posted by on November 2, 2014 in Beginnings, Haiku, Love, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry

 

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23 responses to “Dusk

  1. vandana

    November 2, 2014 at 8:21 am

    The lovely dusk that gives us solace.

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  2. magicalmysticalteacher

    November 2, 2014 at 8:41 am

    I really like the image of dusk lighting a bright candle. How encouraging and comforting!

    Whirling with Galway

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  3. Kerry O'Connor

    November 2, 2014 at 9:06 am

    You have certainly captured the mood of the season in this piece.

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  4. Mary

    November 2, 2014 at 9:48 am

    And the days are getting shorter! And soon we will have to embrace the snow.

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  5. Sumana Roy

    November 2, 2014 at 9:53 am

    “Released fallen leaf

    huddles below my window

    Waiting to embrace the snow.”…..beautiful and sad…

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  6. dsnake1

    November 2, 2014 at 10:09 am

    short and sweet, just like the time dusk is allocated.
    loved the images you painted. 🙂

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  7. Enigma

    November 2, 2014 at 10:14 am

    “Dusk this winter’s eve

    Refraining from a short day

    Lights a bright candle.” – This is brilliant. Loved it!

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  8. Talon

    November 2, 2014 at 12:54 pm

    Such a perfect poem of the dark and the light. I always hate when the clocks go back and suddenly it’s dark before 5 pm. I will light a bright candle. 🙂

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  9. Nataša Dolenc

    November 2, 2014 at 1:24 pm

    lovely and peaceful 🙂

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  10. brian miller

    November 2, 2014 at 1:24 pm

    we are somewhere in between…
    the seasons; and the light
    & the darkness

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  11. Susan

    November 2, 2014 at 1:46 pm

    I love the idea of dusk as refrain of a short day, tring to frighten night! Inthe midst ofthis, one shaking leaf waiting for winter doesn’t seem much!

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  12. Sherry Blue Sky

    November 2, 2014 at 1:48 pm

    I love dusk, and lighting candles against the darkness……and my cool electric pretend-fire which looks so cosy and does not require chopping wood – which I did for years in Tofino. (Nothing beats a real wood fire though.I loved it.)

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  13. Ruth

    November 2, 2014 at 3:46 pm

    I love dusk lighting the bright candle to brighten our otherwise dark nights

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  14. Gabriella

    November 2, 2014 at 4:58 pm

    With the new winter time we need this bright candle even more.

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  15. humbird

    November 2, 2014 at 5:59 pm

    Nice picture you painted with the words.

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  16. G L Meisner

    November 2, 2014 at 6:02 pm

    Yes the light of a simple candle can make a difference for all the dark.

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  17. totomai

    November 2, 2014 at 6:43 pm

    ah simple comfort such as that candle. brrr. i don’t want winter to come back again haha.

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  18. Rallentanda

    November 2, 2014 at 7:37 pm

    Tranquillity and resignation are expressed in this lovely poem.

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  19. Torie

    November 2, 2014 at 8:01 pm

    I like the imagery in this. Very nice!

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  20. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder

    November 3, 2014 at 3:02 am

    Lovely…the dusk..so well described … 🙂

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  21. Gillena Cox

    November 3, 2014 at 6:55 am

    luv the irony of Dusk walking in with her light; what awesome imagery;

    thanks for linking to the Sunday Lime, however, the link doesn’t work, if you like for the benefit of others who want to stop over, you can try adding the link again

    have a good week

    much love…

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  22. 1sojournal

    November 3, 2014 at 3:03 pm

    My favorite time of the day. Beautifully written,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/

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  23. Donna@Living From Happiness

    November 5, 2014 at 2:01 pm

    I feel the darker days in these words and am brightened by the candle of dusk.

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