Posted by ZQ on December 21, 2014 in Beginnings, Haiku, Poetry
Tags: http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.se/, Notes Found On The Refrigerator, Pebbles and Stone/Spiritual
December 21, 2014 at 2:55 pm
The two haiku are both profound reflections on life and the season.
December 21, 2014 at 3:27 pm
Nice write, ZQ 🙂 Happy Holidays to you!
December 21, 2014 at 3:51 pm
Deep thoughts to ponder and yes roses do have thorns and perhaps part of their allure.
December 21, 2014 at 3:53 pm
two awesome haiku; Line3 of the 2nd haiku takes the reader in the contemplation room
Sherry Blue Sky
December 21, 2014 at 5:12 pm
I especially love “wind in silence blows” and “Empty space has doors”. Loved this, kiddo.
Donna@Living From Happiness
December 21, 2014 at 5:18 pm
Wow I am re-reading over and over as your words melt over my heart…such incredible insight especially ’empty space has doors’….so deep and I am smiling shaking my head yes, yes, yes! I need to keep those doors in sight!
December 21, 2014 at 6:02 pm
Mistakes at times can be painfully unrewarding, good one.
December 21, 2014 at 6:28 pm
ripples always seeking shore
Empty space has doors
Great ending ZQ! There is always a way to be creative or to right wrongs.Yet not all take the cue nor care to redress situations that may make one to be revered and admired!
December 21, 2014 at 7:04 pm
ripples always seeking shore . . . I keep re-reading that line. It flows :-). I enjoyed both very much, but the second is really special.
December 21, 2014 at 8:18 pm
Ah! The juxtapositions of life. The conciseness and efficacy of haiku never ceases to amaze me. Well done.
December 21, 2014 at 8:25 pm
Roses and thorns….taking the good with the bad. Nice one!
December 21, 2014 at 8:52 pm
Great mixed and balanced evocation of the season.
December 21, 2014 at 9:08 pm
Yes, sin has redemption! We are all sinners….and there is not one of us who doesn’t need it. Merry Christmas to you, ZQ.
December 22, 2014 at 4:46 am
such a reflective haikus. i liked the first one and how it was concluded with the rose thorns..
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
December 22, 2014 at 8:05 am
These are two very profound haiku… the roses and the empty space .. they work separately yet speak in unison.
December 22, 2014 at 10:05 pm
Very thought-provoking and existential…..’empty space has doors’ in particular has my mind doing some pretty bendy mental gymnastics 😉
December 23, 2014 at 10:03 am
Yes, yes, to the thorns and to the doors–both poems full of grace and gratitude and forgiveness. Happy Holidays, ZQ.
December 25, 2014 at 2:21 am
Merry Christmas 🙂
Mish TechCrunch Segal Foster
December 26, 2014 at 5:00 am
agree, all roses have thorns.
hello, happy holidays.
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