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Thoughts on making mistakes:

21 Dec

Sin has redemption

guilt has no place in heaven

all roses have thorns

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wind in silence blows

ripples always seeking shore

Empty space has doors

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20 Comments

Posted by on December 21, 2014 in Beginnings, Haiku, Poetry

 

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20 responses to “Thoughts on making mistakes:

  1. moondustwriter

    December 21, 2014 at 2:55 pm

    The two haiku are both profound reflections on life and the season.

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  2. Torie

    December 21, 2014 at 3:27 pm

    Nice write, ZQ 🙂 Happy Holidays to you!

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  3. Truedessa

    December 21, 2014 at 3:51 pm

    Deep thoughts to ponder and yes roses do have thorns and perhaps part of their allure.

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  4. gillena

    December 21, 2014 at 3:53 pm

    two awesome haiku; Line3 of the 2nd haiku takes the reader in the contemplation room

    Merry Christmas

    much love…

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  5. Sherry Blue Sky

    December 21, 2014 at 5:12 pm

    I especially love “wind in silence blows” and “Empty space has doors”. Loved this, kiddo.

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  6. Donna@Living From Happiness

    December 21, 2014 at 5:18 pm

    Wow I am re-reading over and over as your words melt over my heart…such incredible insight especially ’empty space has doors’….so deep and I am smiling shaking my head yes, yes, yes! I need to keep those doors in sight!

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  7. tatiusdarksong

    December 21, 2014 at 6:02 pm

    Mistakes at times can be painfully unrewarding, good one.

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  8. kaykuala h

    December 21, 2014 at 6:28 pm

    ripples always seeking shore
    Empty space has doors

    Great ending ZQ! There is always a way to be creative or to right wrongs.Yet not all take the cue nor care to redress situations that may make one to be revered and admired!

    Hank

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  9. nan

    December 21, 2014 at 7:04 pm

    ripples always seeking shore . . . I keep re-reading that line. It flows :-). I enjoyed both very much, but the second is really special.

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  10. skipmars

    December 21, 2014 at 8:18 pm

    Ah! The juxtapositions of life. The conciseness and efficacy of haiku never ceases to amaze me. Well done.

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  11. Rall

    December 21, 2014 at 8:25 pm

    Roses and thorns….taking the good with the bad. Nice one!

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  12. Gabriella

    December 21, 2014 at 8:52 pm

    Great mixed and balanced evocation of the season.

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  13. Mary

    December 21, 2014 at 9:08 pm

    Yes, sin has redemption! We are all sinners….and there is not one of us who doesn’t need it. Merry Christmas to you, ZQ.

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  14. totomai

    December 22, 2014 at 4:46 am

    such a reflective haikus. i liked the first one and how it was concluded with the rose thorns..

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  15. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    December 22, 2014 at 8:05 am

    These are two very profound haiku… the roses and the empty space .. they work separately yet speak in unison.

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  16. C.C.

    December 22, 2014 at 10:05 pm

    Very thought-provoking and existential…..’empty space has doors’ in particular has my mind doing some pretty bendy mental gymnastics 😉

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  17. Susan

    December 23, 2014 at 10:03 am

    Yes, yes, to the thorns and to the doors–both poems full of grace and gratitude and forgiveness. Happy Holidays, ZQ.

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  18. Amrit Sinha

    December 25, 2014 at 2:21 am

    Deeply expressed.

    Merry Christmas 🙂

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  19. Mish TechCrunch Segal Foster

    December 26, 2014 at 5:00 am

    agree, all roses have thorns.

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  20. Mish TechCrunch Segal Foster

    December 26, 2014 at 5:00 am

    hello, happy holidays.

    encouraging you to submit a haiku to us today,

    http://purpletreehouse.blogspot.com/2014/12/christmas-special-of-poetic-forms-haiku.html

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