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A New Day For Love (Rev.5)

16 May

 (click on the red circle and white arrow then scroll as you listen and read 🙂

 

A New Day For Love

Wearing in mid-May, on another cold night,

An old worn night-shirt with faded stars and moon.

Blinds closed in the living room,

Shut tight from years of lost nights

Alone, I dimmed the lights.

 

I traded my night-shirt, for all those sad dreams.

I opened curtains, pushed them back

And cracked the blinds to let in sunlight.

Opening the door to the ‘morrow

Wearing new sneakers and comfortable jeans,

 

I heard you knock.

Kissing me on the lips

As I opened the door,

You held my face,

blushing my cheeks.

 

 

 

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26 Comments

Posted by on May 16, 2015 in Love, New light/New life, Poetry, Poverty

 

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26 responses to “A New Day For Love (Rev.5)

  1. dabrnone

    May 17, 2015 at 7:28 am

    This version is more hopeful…like that of spring. I enjoyed hearing you read!

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  2. Mary

    May 17, 2015 at 8:37 am

    Ah, always good to let the sun shine in! It can change one’s mood entirely, I think, to shed some light. And as for new sneakers, that definitely is another way to make one’s spirit rise!!

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    May 17, 2015 at 9:18 am

    How well the shift of clothes change it for you.. Love the thought of that shirt of faded stars and moon…

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  4. vandana

    May 17, 2015 at 9:18 am

    This directly touches the heart………beautiful

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  5. magicalmysticalteacher

    May 17, 2015 at 9:29 am

    To have one’s face held is bliss!

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  6. Gillena Cox

    May 17, 2015 at 10:09 am

    excellent trade, let the sunlight in and accept your kisses

    thanks for stopping over at my Sunday Lime

    much love…

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  7. nissa_loves_cats

    May 17, 2015 at 10:22 am

    One note: ‘night’s’ should be ‘nights’ since it is clearly plural, not possessive. Other than that, very good work. Like how the change of clothes signifies a change in the person.

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky

    May 17, 2015 at 12:34 pm

    Oh I so love this….trading the night shirt (love the moon and stars!) for the hope of a new day, new dreams, new love………adore the romantic ending……….do we need to update the updating interview, my friend? Are you holding back? LOL. Am happy for you.

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  9. Gautami S Tripathy

    May 17, 2015 at 12:47 pm

    I found this mystical…

    where the night is without wind

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  10. Vagrant Rhodia

    May 17, 2015 at 4:40 pm

    Very well done! I especially enjoyed the transition between old and worn to brand new 🙂

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  11. dani

    May 17, 2015 at 5:26 pm

    i also love the moon and stars night-shirt! and the ending ~ letting in light and love.

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  12. peggygoetz

    May 17, 2015 at 6:03 pm

    Lovely images. I like the transition to hope as well.

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  13. Susan

    May 17, 2015 at 6:13 pm

    A morning of hope and enjoying is wonderful. That’s where your images and voice took me.

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  14. totomai

    May 17, 2015 at 6:21 pm

    And then sad dreams suddenly disappear. 🙂 savor that kiss. it will give you a new perspective of tomorrow

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  15. Donna@Living From Happiness

    May 17, 2015 at 6:52 pm

    I loved listening to you read this…what a powerful read and love….

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  16. Gabriella

    May 17, 2015 at 8:31 pm

    Very romantic!

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  17. Jim

    May 17, 2015 at 10:19 pm

    I believe things are looking up. There is a right time, this was it.
    Practical ones say it should have been done years ago. Not so,
    there was no magic then, this was the time. Nice write, ZQ.
    ..

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  18. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)

    May 17, 2015 at 10:24 pm

    I do like happy endings! 🙂

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  19. Sumana Roy

    May 18, 2015 at 2:42 am

    ah…to bask in the glory of brightness…lovely 🙂

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  20. dsnake1

    May 18, 2015 at 8:35 am

    jeans and sneakers make you more ..free?
    i like happy endings too. 🙂

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  21. Preeti S.

    May 18, 2015 at 12:50 pm

    This warmed my heart. Loved it. 🙂

    – Enigma

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  22. whimsygizmo

    May 18, 2015 at 5:03 pm

    I like this, a lot:
    “I traded my night-shirt, for all those sad dreams.”

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  23. Kim Nelson

    May 18, 2015 at 8:56 pm

    Sop much comfort in this piece. Familiar and at ease. A nice life!

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  24. ManicDdaily

    May 18, 2015 at 10:20 pm

    ZQ! I visited this yesterday and thought I had commented on it–a sweet and lovely poem. I especially like the close–one feels the blush and the lips. K.

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  25. glmeisner

    May 19, 2015 at 7:16 am

    Ah romantic. Great poem.

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  26. humbird

    May 19, 2015 at 1:31 pm

    I like this renewal of the relationships…your voice underlines the meaningfulness of them.

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