Sweet Surrender

31 May


Sweet sight!

An Aurora’s light within my lover’s soul;

A spark so bright, roses bloom premature.


Men whisper of their meetings with her.

Those without souls to see… leave in jerking gesture;

As lovers teased in adolescent adventure

Admitting not to be of such high-caliber,

To be in her presence, without hope or future.


Help me my friends, how do I describe her?

Pure, innocent, commissions’ love ever-present.


All are invited. Silence your words,

Those who are willing to lose their minds,

accepting a hearts’ sweet surrender.


Posted by on May 31, 2015 in Love, New light/New life, Poetry, Zen


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8 responses to “Sweet Surrender

  1. Gillena Cox

    June 4, 2015 at 6:30 am

    Thanks for linking up at my Sunday Lime

    much love…

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Miss Stacy

    June 4, 2015 at 1:14 am

    she sounds like someone standing on the edge of a beautiful mess….
    and you, my friend, are quite the scribe!
    someone i had lost the link to your blog…i’m so excited to find it tonight! lol 🙂


  3. Myrna Rosa

    June 2, 2015 at 9:52 am

    Wow. That’s some love and a lucky woman to be perceived this way.


  4. Leovi

    June 2, 2015 at 3:57 am

    Good poem! Beautiful madness of love!


  5. ManicDdaily

    June 1, 2015 at 8:40 pm

    She sounds pretty special! Thanks, ZQ. k.


  6. Kim Nelson

    June 1, 2015 at 6:24 pm

    I gave lots of thought to the notion of losing one’s mind in order to surrender to one’s heart. I want both!!!!! Greedy woman, to be sure!


  7. dabrnone

    May 31, 2015 at 6:48 pm

    Truly enjoy hearing you read. Such a fortunate lady to be described as in this poem.


  8. Donna@Living From Happiness

    May 31, 2015 at 5:38 pm

    I love listening to you read this poem…’A spark so bright, roses bloom premature.’ Oh to be described as this….



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