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Autumn Haiku(s)

01 Nov

The leaf, green, full-grown

falls yellow in autumn frost,

meets angel in flight.

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Love, love, sing don’t cry

Lilly pad tops below ice

Autumn’s thrown dice.

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Gold feather swamp grass

bending in maturity

above frozen pond.swamp grass

 

 

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Posted by on November 1, 2015 in Haiku, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry, window gazing

 

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13 responses to “Autumn Haiku(s)

  1. Donna@Living From Happiness

    November 1, 2015 at 3:51 pm

    Beautiful observations as autumn takes hold and shows its splendor is small happenings.

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  2. Sherry Marr

    November 1, 2015 at 3:54 pm

    These are so beautiful, my friend. We are still a ways away from frost, never mind ice, but it is November 1st so we will not be too far behind.

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  3. Purba Chakraborty (@Manchali_Purba)

    November 1, 2015 at 3:55 pm

    So beautiful.

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  4. Mary

    November 1, 2015 at 6:06 pm

    You have written some excellent haiku, ZQ! The first one especially, meeting angel in flight, leaves me speechless. I think haiku may be your strong suit…really good stuff!

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  5. Victoria

    November 2, 2015 at 1:07 am

    bittersweet, like autumn is –

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  6. dsnake1

    November 2, 2015 at 2:02 am

    the cold is coming!
    great observations of autumn on this lovely set, my friend! 🙂

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    November 2, 2015 at 2:24 am

    This is an excellent collection… I felt he moment in your writing.. wonderful

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  8. Kenn Merchant

    November 2, 2015 at 2:11 pm

    These haikus certainly grab the attention to autumn’s scenery.

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  9. Torie

    November 2, 2015 at 2:16 pm

    These are beautiful, ZQ. I always admire those that can write Haiku. Very well done!

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  10. Jae Rose

    November 3, 2015 at 8:17 am

    Such a beautiful and wise triptych..sing don’t cry was the line that resonate most for me…wonderful!

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  11. Nataša Dolenc

    November 3, 2015 at 2:50 pm

    lovely imagery and peaceful mood.

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  12. Susan

    November 3, 2015 at 8:57 pm

    This is my favorite image: “Lilly pad tops below ice / Autumn’s thrown dice.” I think they are winners.

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