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Notes found on the refrigerator February 2016

21 Feb

(On The Haiku Corner)

Leafless oak branches

Shadow­ green pines in darkness

Silhouette full moon

          *

Oh moon, so steady

In my inconsistent life,

Teach me morning light

          *

Sunshine melts the earth

Frozen heart begins to thaw

Speechless in action

          *

A Chaotic life

forgiven in fertile soil

flower has to bloom

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22 Comments

Posted by on February 21, 2016 in Haiku, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry, Zen

 

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22 responses to “Notes found on the refrigerator February 2016

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    February 21, 2016 at 12:18 pm

    In the end the bloom will come and chaotic life will be rewarded.

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi

    February 21, 2016 at 12:57 pm

    Love this!!

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  3. Donna@Living From Happiness

    February 21, 2016 at 1:03 pm

    Where to start….each line sings to me…it seems we both are inspired by nature and the sky.

    ‘Teach me morning light’ Yes so much we can learn from that morning light!

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  4. Sherry Marr

    February 21, 2016 at 2:14 pm

    I love these, especially “teach me morning light.” Love the thawing of the frozen heart and “flower has to bloom.” Yes, it does! Bloom on, fellow pilgrim!

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  5. Myrna Rosa

    February 21, 2016 at 2:52 pm

    I like these so much, especially the 2nd and 4th. Beautiful writing.

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  6. Mary

    February 21, 2016 at 3:01 pm

    Oh we can so much from the moon. Though it appears in the darkness, it definitely CAN teach us about light.

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  7. Paul Andrew Russell

    February 21, 2016 at 3:53 pm

    Haiku, my favourite form of poetry. 🙂 Lovely.

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  8. humbird

    February 21, 2016 at 4:18 pm

    I feel the power of coming spring in your haiku despite the refrigerator’s power…

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  9. gillena

    February 21, 2016 at 7:08 pm

    Luv that plead to the moon and the end verse of hope. Thanks for linking to my Sunday Lime, but again you should tryvagain since I didn’t get to your post through the link

    Have a good week

    Much love…

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  10. Em

    February 21, 2016 at 7:19 pm

    Love the second stanza.

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  11. James Toma (Jamztoma)

    February 21, 2016 at 7:42 pm

    These are very well-crafted haikus. I enjoyed them RK. Nicely put.

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  12. thotpurge

    February 21, 2016 at 8:22 pm

    Oh moon, so steady
    In my inconsistent life,
    Teach me morning light

    Can’t tell you how much I loved this one! The last line is a stunner.

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  13. magicalmysticalteacher

    February 21, 2016 at 9:10 pm

    I too am thankful for the steadiness of the moon. Everything else in this election year seems to be chaotic!

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  14. Truedessa

    February 21, 2016 at 9:29 pm

    teach me morning light – there are many lessons we learn in life..it will be a full moon tomorrow and I hope to get a glimpse of it’s radiant glow.

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  15. abinchakraborty

    February 21, 2016 at 10:07 pm

    love the sense of regeneration your lines carry.and asking the moon to teach morning light was a nice touch.

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  16. Suyash Jha

    February 21, 2016 at 10:18 pm

    Oh moon, so steady

    In my inconsistent life,

    Teach me morning light

    those were wonderful lines

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  17. Sumana Roy

    February 22, 2016 at 5:29 am

    I love the thawing…most important in life…

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  18. dsnake1

    February 22, 2016 at 6:39 am

    each haiku a gem itself!
    your refrigerator’s gonna get very smart absorbing these wisdom. 🙂

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  19. Jae Rose

    February 22, 2016 at 8:07 am

    A magical poem – made me stop and think how the moon is constant and the sun varies in its light and intensity – thank you for that alone!

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  20. 1sojournal

    February 22, 2016 at 9:01 am

    Well thought out and accomplished.

    Elizabeth
    https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/02/21/the-quiet-rage/

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  21. gillena

    February 22, 2016 at 11:11 am

    Thanks, i was was able to follow your link to your blog this time; and remember sometime to drop in at Monday WRites

    much love…

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  22. frederick anderson

    February 27, 2016 at 4:05 am

    For what does February have to offer but promise? Beautiful poem.

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