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Another Challenging Morning

19 Jun

The light between branches at evenings’ dusk,

With eyes raised towards a sinking sunset;

I found myself in prayer and in trust,

To hear a voice without malice or threat.

 

Only one thought could escape my loose mind,

Scrambling in a futile sentence out loud;

Denying You and all that is Divine,

Deafened in doubt with branches hidden shroud.

 

Yet, light continues to shine throughout night,

Quarter moon, half moon waxing or waning;

Follows me in silent Lover’s flight,

Forgiving, of course, my sins in morning.

 

Awaking in a new life of terror;

Asking me, to be life without error.

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Posted by on June 19, 2016 in Beginnings, Pine Cone Diaries, Poetry

 

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17 responses to “Another Challenging Morning

  1. Jae Rose

    June 19, 2016 at 7:45 am

    The last two lines are so humbling – and the voice so comforting..yes..hopefully we are all given the chance of another morning..we will make mistakes but hopefully we will learn..and move on to the next day and challenge

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  2. anmol(alias HA)

    June 19, 2016 at 7:52 am

    A beautifully meditative piece. 🙂
    -HA

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  3. oldegg

    June 19, 2016 at 8:00 am

    We are lucky that we are given plenty of chances to redeem ourselves.

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  4. thotpurge

    June 19, 2016 at 8:26 am

    to be a life without error…. that is a tremendous goal…but the moon can be a good guide.

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  5. Mary

    June 19, 2016 at 9:31 am

    Yes, it is good that light continues to shine…and there is always forgiveness!

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  6. Sumana Roy

    June 19, 2016 at 10:35 am

    even in darkness there’s light, our comfort…a beautiful one ZQ….

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  7. Sanaa Rizvi

    June 19, 2016 at 11:32 am

    Beautiful and soulful write 🙂

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  8. Gillena Cox

    June 19, 2016 at 12:35 pm

    it does seem like asking a lot, but remember we are human and only by divine inspiration are we readied to face another day, already designed

    Have a nice Sunday

    much love…

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  9. Sherry Marr

    June 19, 2016 at 1:20 pm

    What gives me comfort, in the man made chaos and horror of this life, are the rhythms of nature, repeating in endless cycle of life, so dedicated to all that lives. And what a great idea, life has, giving us a world brand new every morning, and another day, another chance to get it right. I love this poem, kiddo.

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  10. Donna@Living From Happiness

    June 19, 2016 at 1:48 pm

    It is terrifying to try and live life without error…but oh thankfulness for that morning light as a new day dawns and we can start anew.

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  11. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)

    June 19, 2016 at 7:34 pm

    Forgiving, of course, my sins in morning.
    Awaking in a new life of terror;
    Asking me, to be life without error.

    Great closing lines ZQ! It is always a constant reminder that may be given a chance to make amends and one is obliged to do so.

    Hank

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  12. Magaly Guerrero

    June 19, 2016 at 8:36 pm

    This is a perfect time “To hear a voice without malice or threat.” ♥

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  13. drimys

    June 19, 2016 at 11:20 pm

    The last two stanzas are my favorites.

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  14. 1sojournal

    June 20, 2016 at 11:53 am

    Wonderful writing. Learning to be grateful for another day is of great importance,

    Elizabeth
    https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/06/19/would-be-king/

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  15. Audrey Howitt

    June 20, 2016 at 12:54 pm

    Your voice here is so clear–beautifully penned!

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  16. magicalmysticalteacher

    June 20, 2016 at 8:52 pm

    Life without error, I definitely am not!

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  17. ZQ

    June 20, 2016 at 8:58 pm

    Yup… it’s a stinkin’ process 🙂 …although I am making fewer of them ❤

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