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True Lovers Past

03 Sep

(Mid-town)

Wine, whiskey, and roses—

In alcove with three large windows

Straight lace tablecloth on heirloom table

               (Across town)

Barn-board counter top, single sink,

Hand pumped water

Red-checkered vinyl tablecloth

 

Two shot glasses, acapella— on each table

 

(Mid-town)

Vase, decanter, and a blue corked bottle

One in the Yin—

Another in the Yang

 

A well-rounded glass globe—  

Wine circling in small waves

Well below the rim.

 

The toast is the same.

 

(Across town)

Mason jar with whiskey and ice

Raised above a drying rose

The toast is the same.

 

Salute’ to the empty chair

At both their tables—

“May you be well, happy, and peaceful.”

Note: True Lovers Past

 

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22 responses to “True Lovers Past

  1. Paul F. Lenzi

    September 3, 2016 at 11:51 pm

    the empty chair so full of presence

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  2. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)

    September 4, 2016 at 7:26 am

    Sensuously and delicately beautiful to usher in the young lovers in their moments together! Wonderful lines ZQ!

    Hank

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  3. Jae Rose

    September 4, 2016 at 9:35 am

    A real brew – brought superbly to an end with that toast 🙂

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  4. Sumana Roy

    September 4, 2016 at 9:41 am

    aha…beautiful…

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  5. dabrnone

    September 4, 2016 at 10:50 am

    Salut!

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  6. thotpurge

    September 4, 2016 at 11:13 am

    that empty chair at both locations…beautiful

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  7. Sherry Marr

    September 4, 2016 at 12:14 pm

    I enjoyed the contrasting settings and lean towards the barn board counter top myself. Love that the toasts are the same and the blessing so peaceful. Loved it, my friend.

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  8. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)

    September 4, 2016 at 1:04 pm

    Beautifully sensuous write ❤

    Liked by 1 person

     
  9. Julian

    September 4, 2016 at 1:41 pm

    Like this poem alot. ….empty chair at both their tables.

    Liked by 1 person

     
  10. Mary

    September 4, 2016 at 1:52 pm

    And, oh, the loneliness in between the lines & the homes.

    Liked by 1 person

     
  11. Myrna Rosa

    September 4, 2016 at 2:34 pm

    This says so much about diverse circumstances while making the same toast/wish. I hope we all make the same toast.

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  12. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    September 4, 2016 at 3:07 pm

    Sorrow and loneliness is the same no matter the location… love the mirroring idea of this poem

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  13. Magaly Guerrero

    September 4, 2016 at 6:41 pm

    If the two homes could only get together…

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  14. 1sojournal

    September 4, 2016 at 7:19 pm

    Different, yet the same on telling levels,

    Elizabeth
    https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/09/04/sometimes-cinderella/

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  15. ayala zarfjian (@ayalazarfjian)

    September 4, 2016 at 7:25 pm

    Empty chair profound.

    Liked by 1 person

     
  16. Rall

    September 4, 2016 at 8:32 pm

    Sweet poem. Good point made.

    Liked by 1 person

     
  17. magicofwordsblog

    September 5, 2016 at 3:56 pm

    Well, these two should get together! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

     
  18. gillena

    September 5, 2016 at 5:36 pm

    You definitely have the art of the storyteller/dramatist. I can see this choreographed and told also in dance
    Thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime this week

    much love…

    Liked by 1 person

     
  19. dsnake1

    September 6, 2016 at 8:55 am

    i loved the detailed imagery in the poem, but do i sense a tinge of yearning in the lines?

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    • ZQ

      September 6, 2016 at 5:10 pm

      Yup!

      Like

       
  20. frederick anderson

    September 7, 2016 at 12:02 pm

    You are always experimenting! I love this – I love the instilled sense of geography.

    Like

     
  21. extra tall cat gate

    October 21, 2016 at 4:59 am

    Αs said that was actually very light and is
    conveniently pushed apart through my bichon schnauzer cross and my jack Shitzu crosses.

    Like

     

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