Immortal Lover

06 Oct

How can the infinite space of the universe capture

And descend into my arms

Another heart with a mind

So unfamiliar to mine?


[From where could it fall?]


An experience that might as well be from the stars

Blinking, shinning, glittering,

 Far too far from it all.

Yet, sends its notice to me through heart and senses  

Dusting my mind in powdered confection.


I thank the morning for logic unimaginable,

Quietly sharing toast with melting honey,

Black coffee and smiles unspeakable.



Posted by on October 6, 2016 in Love, Poetry


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13 responses to “Immortal Lover

  1. Sean Michael

    October 21, 2016 at 4:34 pm

    To answer the first verse.. opposites attract. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Gospel Isosceles

    October 16, 2016 at 9:53 pm

    Wow, this took me to an unexpected place on this unsuspecting evening. Very well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Sherry Marr

    October 16, 2016 at 2:01 pm

    I love the toast and honey and the “smiles unspeakable.” Yay!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. whippetwisdom

    October 7, 2016 at 7:51 am

    Beautifully written and I love the wonder that comes through. The universe provides us with so many wonderful experiences when we let her.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Sanaa Rizvi

    October 7, 2016 at 5:35 am

    Beautiful, wistful and oh so tender write 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  6. maria

    October 7, 2016 at 5:31 am

    Beautiful lines.. I’d have some of that black coffee and smiles unspeakable, please. 😉

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Mish

    October 7, 2016 at 1:22 am

    Love transcends…even from mysterious places….aww, but it is love.

    “I thank the morning for logic unimaginable”
    What a great line. Thanks for joining in for OLN. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    October 7, 2016 at 12:15 am

    Whenever Stars agree to guide you, there is nowhere to be lost.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. jellybean disco

    October 6, 2016 at 11:28 pm

    “Dusting my mind in powdered confection.” … You had me ready to bite, from this line down.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Truedessa

    October 6, 2016 at 10:50 pm

    it seems the stars have given you light – beautiful words…

    Liked by 1 person

  11. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)

    October 6, 2016 at 8:27 pm

    Yet, sends its notice to me through heart and senses
    Dusting my mind in powdered confection.

    When good feelings come our way, even simple acts of having toast and coffee can be such a pleasure! Very true ZQ!


    Liked by 1 person

  12. Grace

    October 6, 2016 at 8:19 pm

    You have a romantic heart ZQ ~

    Liked by 2 people

  13. scotthastiepoet

    October 6, 2016 at 6:50 pm

    A cleverly designed depth conjured here, my friend – a real pleasure to read and plenty of resonances for me here… With Best Wishes Scott

    Liked by 1 person


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