Holderness Rd. Center Sandwich, NH
I looked out my window this morning slowly moving towards the door… smiling, I saw the first snowfall lightly covering the back yard and exposing at its edge, new white paths into an open woods.
(It was usual autumn foliage, sensuous in its finale. Out doing summers delightful green crescendo. Very colorful introductory and passing of those two seasons can never negate spring’s promising return with greater lovers that give them birth and death. They still, however, tease her about her promiscuity).
I was delighted to see, winter keeping his engagement.
Kitchen is brewing, filling the room with the aroma of bold roast coffee. I can hear the kicking off of boots… the stocking pitter-patter of feet, of the artist, above me; carrying wood from the woodshed’s wheelbarrow, and scratching and scraping, stoking the cooling wood stove.
Our winter season has begun.
Seasonal borders
Between sun and snow falling
The line is lovely
Tags: Haibun, http://omukuvah.org/, http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/, New Hampshire, Pine Cone Diaries
Jae Rose
December 14, 2016 at 7:37 am
There is a sense of all being well and as it should be – what could be better 🙂
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Mish
December 13, 2016 at 11:10 pm
I enjoyed the contrast of winter and coming into the warmth indoors. A gorgeous haiku.
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ladynyo
December 13, 2016 at 1:27 pm
Wonderful !~ I think our Winter has also begun, but unfortunately without the lovely snow. Just rain here….but how evocative is your haibun! And a wonderful closing haiku.
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todadwithlovepoetryandprose
December 13, 2016 at 3:57 am
This is delicious!
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MarinaSofia
December 13, 2016 at 3:32 am
Such an evocative description of the everyday consequences of the first snowfall – not at all high-flown and abstract, but really taking me there…
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Sanaa Rizvi
December 13, 2016 at 1:52 am
The first snowfall is definitely an alluring sight ❤️ Beautifully done.
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Glenn Buttkus
December 12, 2016 at 8:11 pm
Winter is still mild, with only light dustings & a few inches of snow, quick to melt off, see in NW WA. But your paean to a white landscape is wonderful; really liked the haiku.
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Bodhirose
December 12, 2016 at 7:52 pm
I like the idea of seasonal borders and then overlapping until the one takes over the other. No snow or much of a border between our seasons here.
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Grace
December 12, 2016 at 6:27 pm
Winter is here as well ~ Looks pristine but I hate the shoveling and the messy roads ~
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Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES
December 12, 2016 at 6:25 pm
Lovely verse that makes me think. We haven’t crossed that line yet, but I’m ready for clean white slate.
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Victoria C. Slotto
December 12, 2016 at 5:44 pm
You put us on the edge of seasons with you, ZQ, much as I’ve experienced here this week–with serious snow promised for the rest of the week.
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frankhubeny
December 12, 2016 at 5:16 pm
I liked the idea of the lovely line between sun and snow falling in your haiku.
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paulscribbles
December 12, 2016 at 3:18 pm
Wonderfully descriptive Haibun and the Haiku’s last line is stunning.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
December 12, 2016 at 3:09 pm
This could be the winter here as well.. a wonderful winter to sense
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kanzensakura
December 12, 2016 at 2:58 pm
The Japanese believe the first snow is a holy event. Your haibun makes it seem so in a lovely, thoughtful way.
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Gillena Cox
December 12, 2016 at 12:02 pm
Monday WRites 87 is live, i invite you to link in
much love…
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Gillena Cox
December 12, 2016 at 12:01 pm
Warm wishes ZQ
much love…
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1sojournal
December 12, 2016 at 11:24 am
Vivid sensuous imagery,
Elizabeth
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magicalmysticalteacher
December 12, 2016 at 10:36 am
I also like seasonal borders—clearly defined ones! 😉
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J Cosmo Newbery
December 12, 2016 at 2:13 am
Could do with a bold roast coffee now actually.
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Rosemary Nissen-Wade
December 12, 2016 at 12:42 am
I’m not fond of cold weather myself, but you do make it sound both beautiful and cosy.
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bkmackenzie
December 11, 2016 at 10:48 pm
I can smell the burning wood and hear the season coming to life…bkm
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kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)
December 11, 2016 at 8:22 pm
The first snowfall is the most thrilling. It brings the year to a close with festive Christmas in between!
Hank
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thotpurge
December 11, 2016 at 8:15 pm
How well you describe the scene…the sounds, the sights, the smells…I can feel them all.
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Rall
December 11, 2016 at 8:14 pm
You make winter sound so inviting and cosy. I like watching it on tv especially at Christmas…lovely !
It’s summer down under…sun and surf…winter is not too different either:)
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Mary
December 11, 2016 at 5:15 pm
Ah, your words could be mine as well. Winter is keeping his engagement here too…and it is indeed ‘lovely’ if one has to go out and drive in it! Always good having you join us, ZQ.
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Sherry Marr
December 11, 2016 at 1:35 pm
And the poem, with its beautiful descriptions, is lovely too.
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Truedessa
December 11, 2016 at 12:52 pm
I think we might have the same view as I woke to a white dust covered landscape and more is on the way this afternoon. Autumn is bidding us farewell as winter comes a calling.
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