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Grow Over The Wall

09 Jan

      It has always been hard for me to describe the birth and the growth of three sons. They,  became so entwined in my birth, that all I could do was to enjoy their wrapping around me; until we let each other go, with love unharmed.

Child like seedling small

Born in the soil of mother

Grow over the wall.

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14 Comments

Posted by on January 9, 2017 in Children, Haibun Poetry, Pine Cone Diaries, Zen

 

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14 responses to “Grow Over The Wall

  1. Truedessa

    January 15, 2017 at 5:12 pm

    I can feel the emotion in your words, you have a deep love for your children

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  2. Hank Pelaez (@kaykuala)

    January 11, 2017 at 5:57 am

    kaykuala

    A seedling it was but just but they grew up fast!

    Hank

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  3. M

    January 10, 2017 at 10:57 pm

    whew. mine are nearly 16 and 18, and that wall is getting shorter by the day ~

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  4. Bodhirose

    January 10, 2017 at 9:14 pm

    Very sweet…as it should be as I children “grow over the wall.”

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  5. ladynyo

    January 10, 2017 at 5:33 pm

    Grown over the wall…..a lovely description of your sons.

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  6. C.C.

    January 10, 2017 at 2:49 pm

    This is so tender-loving, ZQ 🙂 As a mother of three sons, I am moved beyond words by the imagery and feelings you have evoked with this haibun.

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  7. whippetwisdom

    January 10, 2017 at 1:35 pm

    It is beautiful when you can let each other go with love unharmed, they are blessed with a father like you. I love your closing haiku too and the phrase ‘grow over the wall’ especially.

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  8. Kathy Reed

    January 10, 2017 at 12:10 pm

    All entwined…only as a mother can feel 😉

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  9. Victoria Young

    January 10, 2017 at 12:04 pm

    Glad they made it over the wall.

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  10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    January 10, 2017 at 10:47 am

    Love that you took the memory of your children and not just your own.

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  11. dsnake1

    January 10, 2017 at 6:20 am

    great haibun! simple and down-to-earth.
    but a father’s job is never done. 🙂

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  12. purplepeninportland

    January 9, 2017 at 10:05 pm

    Haiku ended this piece beautifully.

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  13. frankhubeny

    January 9, 2017 at 9:04 pm

    So you were one of a set of triplets or had two brothers? Siblings do let each other go, hopefully unharmed, and so do parents and children.

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  14. Grace

    January 9, 2017 at 7:30 pm

    Beautiful, the heart of a proud and loving father ~

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