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A Reality Sandwich and An Ice Cold Existential Beer

30 Mar

ashland, new hampshire—

two in the afternoon

a burger with a thick slice of onion,

mustard on the side

and a cold bottle of beer.

 

looking out a large pane window,

everything from where I sat

looked fine.

you pass by noticed,

i nodded with a smile.

 

and you

quickly

looked away

and everything disappeared.

 

no,

not of course,

my sandwich.

 

just an old flame

puffed in a white cloud of history,

dowsed by another sip

of an ice-cold beer.

 

Rev:2013/2019  Vol. II ~ Love: Hot Water, Crackers, & Ketchup  Soup~

 

 

 
16 Comments

Posted by on March 30, 2019 in Existential, Love, New Hampshire, Poetry, Zen

 

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16 responses to “A Reality Sandwich and An Ice Cold Existential Beer

  1. positivenudge

    May 9, 2019 at 5:57 am

    ❤ just an old flame
    puffed in a white cloud of history,
    dowsed by another sip
    of an ice-cold beer.

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  2. Magaly Guerrero

    March 31, 2019 at 11:05 pm

    Now every sandwich and every beer will bring back that flame.

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  3. oldegg

    March 31, 2019 at 9:30 pm

    Most of the old flames that cross my path are quite happy to chat and be friends regardless of our history all those years ago. Perhaps that is because most break ups were not acrimonious.

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  4. Kestril Trueseeker

    March 31, 2019 at 8:04 pm

    That one beer might not be able to douse the residual smouldering from that old flame. Only time can do that.

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  5. Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES

    March 31, 2019 at 6:24 pm

    This was fun. I’m glad you still have your sandwich.

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  6. Myrna

    March 31, 2019 at 5:43 pm

    Such a rich human moment. We’ve all had one of these and you depict it perfectly.

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  7. sanaarizvi

    March 31, 2019 at 1:12 pm

    ….puffed in a white cloud of history is quite apt and is a better conclusion when it comes to old flames 😊

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    March 31, 2019 at 12:00 pm

    I wonder if it’s a good idea to meet an old flame at such a point… maybe she was wise enough to know that.

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  9. Sherry Blue sky

    March 31, 2019 at 11:56 am

    Oh weird. I thought my first comment had disappeared, then both popped up.

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  10. Sherry Blue sky

    March 31, 2019 at 11:55 am

    I am smiling too, and thinking that the burger and beer may have seemed perfection, before the old flame passed by. Then a bit different after. I enjoyed the dousing of the feelings with the beer. I know the feeling.

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  11. magicalmysticalteacher

    March 31, 2019 at 9:48 am

    The moral of the story is probably something like this: Beer is better than an ex!

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  12. Rall

    March 31, 2019 at 9:26 am

    Oh…such is life. Some don’t want to be reminded of the past and even worse some don’t even remember. Enjoy the burger and beer 🙂

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  13. dsnake1

    March 31, 2019 at 9:12 am

    i can’t stop thinking about that cold bottle of beer.
    ah, old flame, fires us up once a while…
    glad to read you again. 🙂

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  14. gillena cox

    March 31, 2019 at 8:41 am

    Luv the juxtaposition of the here and now and the fleeting memory.
    The sandwich won in the end lije the proverbial bird in the hand 😊

    Happy Sunday to you

    Much💛🌻💛love

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  15. Sherry Blue sky

    March 31, 2019 at 6:04 am

    Ah, those old flames that pop up from time to time. Such a difference in how perfect burger and beer are before she passes, and the sudden deflation after, right? Sigh. Love bites! Smiles.

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  16. skipmanning

    March 31, 2019 at 4:34 am

    Thanks Another big smileAn Ashland NH sandwichand humilityServed with a frostyMaybe an old memorypassing in a poof.skip

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