Notes found on the refrigerator…April 2020
the sound of april rain
i was born in the sound of rain.
whether it was from the grass,
or the splash of baptism;
or the windows of isolation;
or on barred pounding glass in prison;
or when I was safely home,
when it rocked me to sleep.
spring rains bring soothing sound.
proclaiming the birth, I would greet again,
in summer rain…
misty at times
other times as storms…
making roots become stronger
again.
fall’s rain blows the leaf’s
to carpet the cradle;
before it freezes,
and blankets spring
in a lullaby of snow.
i was born in the sound of rain.
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magicalmysticalteacher
April 13, 2020 at 1:10 pm
Rain, cleansing rain. I love your praise of rain, especially in the image of the splashing waters of baptism.
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thotpurge
April 13, 2020 at 5:03 am
I love that opening (and closing) line.. such a tremendous visual.
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oldegg
April 13, 2020 at 1:38 am
This really is a beautiful piece of writing.
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dsnake1
April 13, 2020 at 12:01 am
i like the sound of rain too. there is a certain calming and soothing feel about it. just like your poem. 🙂
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Magaly Guerrero
April 12, 2020 at 11:14 pm
The sound of rain is the best birth-song ever. It must be why we, April babies are so fantastic (and modest, lol).
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Rosemary Nissen-Wade
April 12, 2020 at 10:57 pm
You make it sound like the very best thing to be born into!
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Stranded Tree
April 12, 2020 at 10:35 pm
I’m reading this as the rain is pouring down during a spring storm. Coincidence? Listening to the sound of the rain?
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Jim
April 12, 2020 at 10:18 pm
So very nice RK, I am sorry in being so late in returning your nice comment.
Stay Safe.
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Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES
April 12, 2020 at 7:00 pm
Being in the womb, water is our element. I like the inclusion of baptism here.
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Marja
April 12, 2020 at 4:58 pm
This is so beautiful every line of it
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sanaarizvi
April 12, 2020 at 12:57 pm
Love this especially; “fall’s rain blows the leaf’s to carpet the cradle; before it freezes.” 🙂
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Cressida
April 12, 2020 at 10:27 am
Just beautiful !
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erbiage
April 11, 2020 at 4:54 pm
this is really great. it has a character i can’t quite place. tender, yet aloof maybe. kind of like rain actually. well done!
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Sherry Marr
April 11, 2020 at 12:35 pm
This is beautiful, ZQ. The sound of rain in all its seasons is a fine thing indeed.
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Deb
April 11, 2020 at 6:27 am
The sound of rain-soothing no matter the season!
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skippy manning
April 11, 2020 at 6:08 am
Blessings on you
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