The snow is easy, it just falls
on several notes
played by the wind.
In between the trees
winter’s first appearance
swishes like a skirt, across the yard.
Harmony
in commotion,
in all those exclamations
innocent and clean. I
watch the ballet
and listen
to an orchestra unseen.
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“It is said that King Ajastashatru had strong imprints for understanding emptiness, which was activated in the following way: one day, he invited Manjushri for a meal and was just about to offer him a very fine garment he had made ready, when Manjushri disappeared. Feeling very disappointed, Ajatashatru put on the garment himself and momentarily also disappeared. As a result of this he gained the understanding of emptiness.”
ZQ
December 24, 2013 at 5:45 pm
thank you I think
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elainecanham
December 23, 2013 at 7:07 am
I have no idea what that means, but I like it. It’s made my brain go all knotty.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:24 pm
Thank you ‘sweet pea’
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:24 pm
Thank You.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:23 pm
If I could send you some I would. But, until then have a Coors’ 😀
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:21 pm
Haha…thank you R.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:21 pm
Thank you Mr. V.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:20 pm
Thank you…mine too 🙂
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:20 pm
Thanks T.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:19 pm
😉
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:19 pm
Thank you Mary.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:18 pm
Thank you BlueSky 🙂
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:17 pm
Thank you N.
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:17 pm
May the flakes start 🙂
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ZQ
November 29, 2013 at 8:16 pm
Thank you
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poetrypea
November 27, 2013 at 6:48 am
A very visual piece for me.
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Abin
November 26, 2013 at 11:06 am
liked the images.especially the swishing of the skirt.
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dsnake1
November 25, 2013 at 3:05 pm
i liked how you paced the poem, like a series of haiku. so that’s how snow arrives? 🙂
okay, there is no snow over here, just loads of rain. 😦
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Rallentanda
November 25, 2013 at 12:23 pm
Exquisite capture. It makes me want to be in the snow (just for a short time 🙂
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Anders Vaksinius
November 25, 2013 at 11:59 am
It is pure, it is clean, and it unites when covering the ground. That is wisdom. *smile* Your poem is light and easy itself.
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Sumana Roy
November 25, 2013 at 10:37 am
i like the softness here….’I
watch the ballet
and listen
to an orchestra unseen.’ my favorite lines…
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Talon
November 25, 2013 at 2:42 am
So pretty – it is like a ballet and the wind is the orchestral conductor.
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Gabriella
November 24, 2013 at 8:45 pm
Snow is lovely, especially from the comfort of one’s home!
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Mary
November 24, 2013 at 8:42 pm
Oh, you have written about the beauty of the first snow!! Very light and peaceful. I like it.
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Sherry Marr
November 24, 2013 at 8:20 pm
This is incredibly lovely to read and envision.
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Nataša Dolenc (@Natasek86)
November 24, 2013 at 7:46 pm
beautiful, gentle snow. the ballet… lovely images.
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brian miller
November 24, 2013 at 5:43 pm
lovely….the ballet, the orchestra of our world…i hope to see some of that snow this week…and hear that song a bit more…smiles.
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Sherri B.
November 24, 2013 at 4:15 pm
Oh, I love this…perfect!
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