Shadows in love, walking aging souls,
Revel and bevel in a morning dew.
Greater than all beauty in mornings told,
Shadows follow shade, making one from two.
Bodies at eventide embrace the moon,
Waxing and waning, our shadows did meld;
Sometimes impatient with impending doom.
Arms entwined, her heart, in mine I held.
And now, as you decide darkness is fear,
In a single line a shadow you find;
Walking without me, one has disappeared.
Yes, a cloud does cover the sun sometime.
ManicDdaily
August 22, 2015 at 5:10 pm
A very ironic title! And bittersweet poem. Thanks. k.
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Loredana Donovan
August 19, 2015 at 10:44 pm
Fabulous work! The sonnet form is perfect for this bittersweet love affair 🙂
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glmeisner
August 19, 2015 at 8:56 am
The ending is amazing. Great poem.
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dsnake1
August 19, 2015 at 8:08 am
oh yes, there should be music (preferably with a soulful saxophone) accompanying these words. 🙂
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1sojournal
August 18, 2015 at 8:17 pm
Beautiful expression of love’s moonlight and shadows,
Elizabeth
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Grace
August 18, 2015 at 6:45 pm
I too love the ending ~ This is a lovely sonnet ~
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x
August 18, 2015 at 4:36 pm
You can hope that when two shadows become one that it is a good thing. I guess that is not always the case . And when all that’s left in the sheets are the shadow of an empty depression there is little substance left .
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Suyash J
August 18, 2015 at 2:43 pm
now that ending was amazing
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totomai
August 17, 2015 at 5:25 am
bittersweet indeed.. the sonnet is very balanced here
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Sumana Roy
August 16, 2015 at 11:40 pm
a beautiful sonnet…joy and agony so well expressed…
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Mary
August 16, 2015 at 6:41 pm
ZQ, it is poems like this that make me realize what a talented poet you are! I can really feel this one, its depth, its joy, and its pain!
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Donna@Living From Happiness
August 16, 2015 at 4:25 pm
Oh there is love, beauty and heartache here in this beautiful sonnet….I just sighed at, ‘Arms entwined, her heart, in mine I held.’ It seems that our greatest love affairs do wax and wane, but endure as opposed to those hot and quickly burnt out ones…..really loved this!
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Sherry Blue Sky
August 16, 2015 at 3:52 pm
Wow, I cant tell you how much this poem resonates with me. “Yes, a cloud does cover the sun sometime”….and “the lover’s body, empty to keep.” Sigh. This stage of life is when being a romantic comes back to bite us, LOL. I loved this poem, my friend. One of your best I think.
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C.C.
August 16, 2015 at 2:43 pm
“Waxing and waning, our shadows did meld”—love this….in any true longterm love affair, there will be waxing and waning during the melding.
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Sanaa Rizvi
August 16, 2015 at 1:45 pm
Such a beautiful sonnet 🙂
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Nataša Dolenc
August 16, 2015 at 1:25 pm
so bittersweet and so lovely written.
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moondustwriter
August 16, 2015 at 12:12 pm
The sonnet worked beautifully for the message in this poem. The moon finds many things in sheets…
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
August 16, 2015 at 11:44 am
The shadows in sheets.. What a magnificent way to close a sonnet. Well done.
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