fall vapor catches and thaws the last standing rose;
on dew turning into a frost greeting –
caught in my last breath of summer,
i linger in between that space
understanding the rose —seen
slipping gracefully into winter.
oh, how could i have embraced you?
knowing, i must let you go!
with that said, i sigh a good-bye
with ego and pride;
windy hair and your bright blue eyes.
Romeo, Juliet, and those perfect Bob Dylan lines
that created a pause in time to hear the tide
of changing times.
now, i also must go. but, instead of leading
—i must follow the petals fall.
hypercryptical
January 14, 2020 at 9:45 am
Very moving ZQ, a lovely read indeed.
Anna :o]
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Susie Clevenger
January 13, 2020 at 3:45 pm
For everything thing there is a season….letting go arrives often with melancholy…beautiful poem
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
January 13, 2020 at 3:14 pm
I think we always know that there is an end, we know that there will be pain, but how could you ever refrain.
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Audrey M Howitt
January 13, 2020 at 2:42 pm
A beautiful piece! Such a lovely read!
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Jim
January 13, 2020 at 12:11 pm
I guess that this is the way life is, you told it wonderfully. But it often causes sadness. For both, and the blossom is not always to blame.
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Helen L Dehner
January 13, 2020 at 11:48 am
Love your ode to love, letting go .. and a rose.
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Kerry
January 13, 2020 at 8:57 am
A moving piece of writing.
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jaerose37
January 13, 2020 at 6:28 am
I love your parting verse especially
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Rosemary Nissen-Wade
January 13, 2020 at 3:30 am
Very poignant.
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Jim
January 13, 2020 at 1:54 am
A fun read, fun in finding out what was going on. Great, “the soul that never touches the ground.”
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Vandana
January 12, 2020 at 11:37 pm
It is difficult to letet go, but may be it is the best thing sometimes to do….
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Myrna
January 12, 2020 at 8:10 pm
This is so touching. I love its progression and so many beautiful lines. Truly lovely.
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magicalmysticalteacher
January 12, 2020 at 7:27 pm
Letting go is always hard to do, but humans should (and often do) take a lesson from the rose petals. Love this poem!
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Kestril Trueseeker
January 12, 2020 at 7:18 pm
Even knowing pain awaits us doesn’t deter us from loving.
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gillena cox
January 12, 2020 at 7:08 pm
This is so ethereal, love, soul and fleeting bloom.
Happy New Year ZQ
much❤🌷❤love
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Magaly Guerrero
January 12, 2020 at 5:18 pm
This poem reads like a song, and the third stanza is a heart-squeezing note.
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hhennenburg
January 12, 2020 at 5:05 pm
Love that pause in time and that our art reminds us to pay attention. Something always new in the soul…what a wonderful end.
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Sherry Marr
January 11, 2020 at 9:46 pm
“How could I have embraced you, knowing I must let you go?” The lover’s dilemma, every time. Sigh. So poignant, the goodbye to “windy hair and your bright blue eyes”. In your closing lines, I sense a bigger story. Always lovely to read you, my friend.
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