(On The Haiku Corner)
Leafless oak branches
Shadow green pines in darkness
Silhouette full moon
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Oh moon, so steady
In my inconsistent life,
Teach me morning light
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Sunshine melts the earth
Frozen heart begins to thaw
Speechless in action
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A Chaotic life
forgiven in fertile soil
flower has to bloom
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frederick anderson
February 27, 2016 at 4:05 am
For what does February have to offer but promise? Beautiful poem.
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gillena
February 22, 2016 at 11:11 am
Thanks, i was was able to follow your link to your blog this time; and remember sometime to drop in at Monday WRites
much love…
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1sojournal
February 22, 2016 at 9:01 am
Well thought out and accomplished.
Elizabeth
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Jae Rose
February 22, 2016 at 8:07 am
A magical poem – made me stop and think how the moon is constant and the sun varies in its light and intensity – thank you for that alone!
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dsnake1
February 22, 2016 at 6:39 am
each haiku a gem itself!
your refrigerator’s gonna get very smart absorbing these wisdom. 🙂
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Sumana Roy
February 22, 2016 at 5:29 am
I love the thawing…most important in life…
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Suyash Jha
February 21, 2016 at 10:18 pm
Oh moon, so steady
In my inconsistent life,
Teach me morning light
those were wonderful lines
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abinchakraborty
February 21, 2016 at 10:07 pm
love the sense of regeneration your lines carry.and asking the moon to teach morning light was a nice touch.
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Truedessa
February 21, 2016 at 9:29 pm
teach me morning light – there are many lessons we learn in life..it will be a full moon tomorrow and I hope to get a glimpse of it’s radiant glow.
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magicalmysticalteacher
February 21, 2016 at 9:10 pm
I too am thankful for the steadiness of the moon. Everything else in this election year seems to be chaotic!
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thotpurge
February 21, 2016 at 8:22 pm
Oh moon, so steady
In my inconsistent life,
Teach me morning light
Can’t tell you how much I loved this one! The last line is a stunner.
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James Toma (Jamztoma)
February 21, 2016 at 7:42 pm
These are very well-crafted haikus. I enjoyed them RK. Nicely put.
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Em
February 21, 2016 at 7:19 pm
Love the second stanza.
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gillena
February 21, 2016 at 7:08 pm
Luv that plead to the moon and the end verse of hope. Thanks for linking to my Sunday Lime, but again you should tryvagain since I didn’t get to your post through the link
Have a good week
Much love…
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humbird
February 21, 2016 at 4:18 pm
I feel the power of coming spring in your haiku despite the refrigerator’s power…
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Paul Andrew Russell
February 21, 2016 at 3:53 pm
Haiku, my favourite form of poetry. 🙂 Lovely.
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Mary
February 21, 2016 at 3:01 pm
Oh we can so much from the moon. Though it appears in the darkness, it definitely CAN teach us about light.
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Myrna Rosa
February 21, 2016 at 2:52 pm
I like these so much, especially the 2nd and 4th. Beautiful writing.
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Sherry Marr
February 21, 2016 at 2:14 pm
I love these, especially “teach me morning light.” Love the thawing of the frozen heart and “flower has to bloom.” Yes, it does! Bloom on, fellow pilgrim!
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Donna@Living From Happiness
February 21, 2016 at 1:03 pm
Where to start….each line sings to me…it seems we both are inspired by nature and the sky.
‘Teach me morning light’ Yes so much we can learn from that morning light!
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Sanaa Rizvi
February 21, 2016 at 12:57 pm
Love this!!
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
February 21, 2016 at 12:18 pm
In the end the bloom will come and chaotic life will be rewarded.
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